1. WHEN THE WALLS SPEAK THEY WHISPER DARKNESS by Damien Walters Grintalis (I knew that was a DWG title)
2. MOVING DAY by Mark Onspaugh
3. BETWEEN by Jaelithe Ingold
Second place wins bragging rights, so here’s the brag: it’s a cliché, but I really mean it when I say I’m honored to have tied with Amanda C. Davis and Jaelithe Ingold, both of whom impressed the hell out of me.
The winning story was Rebirth, by Merrilee Faber. Merilee spun a vivid, creepy tale that also manages to radiate a twisted tenderness. You can’t read her story yet, because it’s still in the running for publication, but you can check out her blog here:
The process of anonymous voting/critiquing reminded me of some things I thought I knew about writing and publishing, but that only first hand experience can drive home.
What I learned at Flash Camp:
1. Even when you assemble twenty odd (very odd) people who all claim to write in the same genre, and give them all the same story prompt, the results of their writing and voting will show a wide diversity of taste, style and approach. Isn’t that awesome? I think so.
2. It’s a bitch being on the editor’s side of the desk, having to choose one great story at the expense of another. Sometimes you have to reject a wonderful piece because it doesn’t quite fit the vision of the publication, or in this case, the prompt.
3. Sort of a restating of 1 and 2, but I think it bears repeating: The chemistry between a writer, a story and a reader is totally subjective. It can be easy to forget that, and start thinking that if someone rejected your story, the story must be defective. If only you can fix your story, everyone will love it. No, sorry. A story is not a gadget. Even if it works, it won’t work for everyone. I find that kind of liberating.
So now that I know it won’t be in Shock Totem, where should I submit The Joining?